Poem of the Week: "The Consolations," the Second Version
Last week, people, I posted the first stanza of The Consolations,
the poem that, if I ever get another poetry collection published will
be both the title poem and the first poem in the book. There's going to
be a poem by that same name as the last poem in the theoretical
collection. Here's the first stanza of that second version.
The Consolations
12 October 2004
There were many.
There was poetry. Why lie?
It comforted me. Words
took on the terror. Hurt
took the place of my brother
hitting the street. Earth
took the place of the new distance
between him and myself.
Night was death, the moving
from feeling to unfeeling. Death
was itself, but on a page,
not in the world. I wrote poems,
they carried me across.
The Consolations
12 October 2004
There were many.
There was poetry. Why lie?
It comforted me. Words
took on the terror. Hurt
took the place of my brother
hitting the street. Earth
took the place of the new distance
between him and myself.
Night was death, the moving
from feeling to unfeeling. Death
was itself, but on a page,
not in the world. I wrote poems,
they carried me across.